Question

10．请根据以下的说明内容，使用连贯的英语句子写一篇短文．
暑假即将来临，同学们就自己暑假生活安排进行了交流．假设你是李明，请给你在美国的笔友约翰写一封信，告诉他你班上的同学和你自己的暑假计划．内容应包括以下要点：
1．有的同学打算外出旅游，放松一下．
2．有的同学计划在家中多读书，为将来的学习做准备．
3．有的同学准备参加体育锻炼，保持身体健康．
4．谈谈自己的暑期安排．
注意：
1．信的格式已给出；
2．内容应包括以上要点，可以适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．词数：100 左右．
参考词汇：放松relax，为…做准备get ready for 参加体育锻炼do some sports
Dear John，
How are you？The summer holiday is coming．Now let me tell you our plans in the summer holiday．We have different plans．Some of my classmates are going to visit some places of interest to relax themselves．Some are not going out．Instead，they are going to do more reading and learn more knowledge to get ready for the future studies．Some want to do more sports to keep fit．As for me，I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them do some housework，such as doing some cleaning and washing．Besides，I need to relax myself，so I am going to travel to Beijing with my parents．Finally，I will take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society and put what I have learned into practice．
What is your plan for the summer holiday？I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming．
Yours，
Li Ming．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文，本文只给出了主要写作要点．写作中要注意从四个方面进行叙述，并自己补充一到两点．动笔前应根据材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题．注意不要遗漏要点，做到语句通顺．写作中注意使用连接词，序数词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
亮点句型一：．As for me，I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them do some housework，such as doing some cleaning and washing．至于我，我会尽量多花点时间和父母聊天，帮他们做些家务，比如洗衣服和洗衣服．本句用了很多的短语 如：try to do"试图做某事"；as for"至于"，spend…（in）doing"花费时间或者金钱干某事"；help sb （to） do sth"帮助某人做某事"such as"例如"等．
亮点句型二：Finally，I will take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society and put what I have learned into practice．最后，我会参加一些社会活动，以便我能更多地了解社会，把我所学到的知识运用到实践中去．so that 在本句中引导的是目的状语从句．what I have learned 是宾语从句．从句中缺少宾语所以用what来引导．

解答 Dear John，
How are you？The summer holiday is coming．Now let me tell you our plans in the summer holiday．We have different plans．Some of my classmates are going to visit some places of interest to relax themselves．Some are not going out．Instead，they are going to do more reading and learn more knowledge to get ready for the future studies．Some want to do more sports to keep fit．As for me，I will try to spend more time in chatting with my parents and help them do some housework，such as doing some cleaning and washing．（亮点句型一）Besides，I need to relax myself，so I am going to travel to Beijing with my parents．Finally，I will take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society and put what I have learned into practice．（亮点句型二）
What is your plan for the summer holiday？I'm looking forward to your early reply．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Ming

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．