Question

【题目】假设你是学生会主席李华。一批来自美国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期三周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。

1.回顾双方的交流活动（学习、体育、文化等方面）；

2.谈谈收获或感情；

3.表达祝愿与期望。

注意：

1.词数：100词左右；

2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；

3.开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear friends,

I’m Li Hua, president of the students’ Union.

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

I’m Li Hua, president of the students’ Union. It’s my great privilege to be here, sharing this moment with our fellow friends from the United States. During the three-week activities, we surely exchanged our ideas on learning, sports and cultures. One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.

The past three weeks witnessed our growth and our friendship. It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us deeply. After the precious exchange activity, we now have a better understanding of each other on a whole new level.

Now I sincerely hope that our friendship last forever. Wish you all the best.

Thank you.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节.不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文童更有文采。宙题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文童显得更连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文是一篇发言稿，格式正确，采用三段式，文章结构布局合理，同时使用高级句子。It’s my great privilege to be here, sharing this moment with our fellow friends from the United States.现在分词做伴随状语；One of the highlights was the sports meeting where we competed with each other in the basketball match.

where在句中引导定语从句；The past three weeks witnessed our growth and our friendship. Witness使用巧妙；It is not only your enthusiasm but also your teamwork and good spirits that impress us deeply.强调句型堪称经典。