Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Attention please, everyone. I have announcement to make. You will pay a visit to the museum on October 1st I think we will be interest in it. In the course of the visit, the guide will give us an account of the past or the development of the city. She say something about the advanced workers, included some teachers. We will see many pictures there .I am sure of that we can learn a lot. After the visit, we will have a discussion in group and each of us must write a composition. We are to star out as earlier as 7:20 a.m. . We must gather against time at the school gate . That's all, Thanks.

Answer 1

【答案】1. an

2.We

3.interested

4. and

5. will say

6.including

7.of去掉

8.groups

9.early

10.on/in

【解析】announcement是名词，名词在句子中要么用复数，要么前面有a/an冠词修饰。根据短文内容可知“我”有一个消息要宣告，announcement是以元音字母开头的单词，故announcement前加an.

本文通篇提到众人的时候使用的都是“we”，本处的“you”你们。有些突兀。故将you 改为we.

固定搭配be interested in，意为对……感兴趣。故将interest改为interested。

“ I think we will be interest in it. In the course of the visit”和“the guide will give us an account of the past or the development of the city.”是两个完整的句子，两句在同一个句子中是并列关系，用and连接。故the guide前加and。

5.She和we是一起的，二者的动作是同时进行的，而且此处未来参观博物的活动，要用将来时。故在say前加will。

6.固定搭配sth included，including sth，意为包括……。故将included改为including。

7.sure后接从句不需要介词。故将of删去。

8.学生们是分组讨论的，一组是意见统一。故将group改为groups。

9.earlier是比较级，as……as结构中，中间填的是原形，故将earlier改为early。

10.时间前面要加on或in。故在7:20 a.m前加on/in。