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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I first reached junior high school without my parents, I was very happy. Then I saw them getting further away from school gate. I started crying because of the thought of not often seeing my parents drove me crazily, I was then taken to my dorm in that I found other children very happy. I was sick because I hated eating the school food. I failed to concentrating in class. All I could think of was being at home with my family. As time gone by, I gradually adapted me to the school life. Thank to my parents, I finally learned to be independence and control my emotions.

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【解析】

本文为记叙文。文章记叙了作者刚刚开始初中生活的感受。

第一处：考查介词。without“没有”，with“和……在一起”。根据下文Then I saw them getting further away可知，作者的父母陪着他去上学。故without改为with。

第二处：考查定冠词或形容词性物主代词。此处特指“我学校的校门”，应使用定冠词或形容词性物主代词。故school前加the/my。

第三处：考查连词。because是连词，其后接从句；because of后接词组，此处是从句，应去掉because后的of。故去掉because后的of。

第四处：考查形容词。固定搭配：drive sb./sth.+adj.“使某人/某事怎么样”。故crazily改为crazy。

第五处：考查定语从句。此处先行词是my dorm，关系词在介词in后，应使用关系代词which引导，in which=where。故that改为which。

第六处：考查动词形式。固定搭配：fail to do sth.“没能做某事”。故concentrating改为concentrate。

第七处：考查动词形式。as引导时间状语从句，此处做谓语，根据语境，应使用一般过去时。故gone改为went。

第八处：考查代词。固定搭配：adapt oneself to“使自己适应”。故me改为myself。

第九处：考查固定短语。固定短语：thanks to“由于，多亏了”。故Thank改为Thanks。

第十处：考查形容词。此处做表语，意为“最终我学会了自立”，应使用形容词。故independence改为independent。