Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Go Beyond Yourself”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，记述你刻苦训练，成功通过体育测试长跑项目的过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：体育测试 Physical Fitness Test

Go Beyond Yourself

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Answer 1

【答案】Go Beyond Yourself

Last week, I successfully passed the Physical Fitness Test.

During a PE class one month ago, our teacher informed us that we would take the test on April 12th. Upon hearing the news, I felt my heart sink, wondering how rough the way ahead would be. However, I had to face it. Every day after school, I went to the playground and practiced the 1000-meter run, which was always a nightmare for me. Each time when my legs almost gave out and an inner voice lured me to give up, my teachers and classmates were always around me, comforting me and encouraging me. Their positive words and running figures pushed me forward.

Then finally came the test day. As the starting gun sounded for the race to begin, I called upon all my body’s strength and speed. I ran with purpose. After enduring the long run, I approached the finish line. Quickening my steps, I was confident and hopeful. The moment I rounded the last turn, I knew I had made it. After crossing the finish line, I was so overjoyed to see my cheering classmates. I received their celebratory high-fives proudly and tears of happiness streamed down my cheeks, as my teacher shook my hand.

From this experience, I have learned that I should face my fears bravely and appreciate those who are always willing to help me, making me a better person.

【解析】

这是一篇图画类作文。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为写一篇记叙文；请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Go Beyond Yourself”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，记述你刻苦训练，成功通过体育测试长跑项目的过程。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：the Physical Fitness Test（体育测试），rough（艰苦），give out（筋疲力尽），lure（引诱）；figures（名人）；with purpose（决心；目的）；Quicken（加快）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。