Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三（1）班学生李华，上周末你和同学到公园游览。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“My Experience in the Park”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍游园过程中发生的一件事。

注意：词数不少于60。

提示词：拱桥 arch bridge

My Experience in the Park

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Answer 1

【答案】My Experience in the Park

Last weekend my classmates and I went to a nearby park for relaxation.

As we entered the park, we found so many tourists enjoying the beauty of spring. Some were taking photos of colorful flowers. Some were sitting comfortably in the sun chatting. When we came to an arch bridge, we noticed a grandpa struggling to push a wheel chair onto the bridge. A grandma was sitting in it. Seeing this, my classmates and I rushed forward to give them a hand. Two of us tried hard to push the wheelchair, while another classmate walked across the bridge with the grandpa. The elderly couple were very grateful and spoke highly of us. Some tourists standing nearby also praised us with their thumbs up.

We enjoyed the natural beauty of spring today, and most importantly, we were happy that we could be of help to others.

My Experience in the Park

Last weekend, my classmates and I set off for the park to experience extraordinary scenery, which proved to be a joyful and meaningful experience.

With beams of the sunshine carpeting over the ground we stepped into the park, the vigorous sight deeply attracted us. Some tourists were taking photos of colorful flowers, appreciating and embracing the beauty of this vibrant spring. While others were sitting comfortably in the sun chatting.

However, as we were wandering near an arch bridge, a grandpa struggling to push a wheelchair onto the bridge caught out attention. A grandma was sitting in it. On seeing this, my classmate and I rushed forward and extended our helping hands with no hesitation. Two of us tried hard to drag and push the wheelchair, while another classmate steadied the grandpa, walking across the bridge. Within seconds the sweat washed over me, “but how meaningful I’m doing”, I thought.

The elderly couple and some tourists standing nearby praised us with their thumbs up, expressing their gratitude for our assistance. It was at the moment that I came to felt charm of this lovely season, not merely the energetic lives but passionate hearts.

【解析】

这是一篇图画类写作。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一篇记叙文；上周末你和同学到公园游览。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“My Experience in the Park”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍游园过程中发生的一件事。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：for relaxation（放松），take photos of（拍照），arch bridge（拱桥），give a hand（帮忙）；speak highly of（表扬）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。