Question

假设你是李华，你上周从某一网店上购买了一部手机，使用五天后发现开机有困难，屏幕显示也有问题。请你给那家网店写一封投诉信，反映你的问题与要求。
注意：
1．词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
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Answer 1

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Dear Sir,
The cell phone that I ordered from your store arrived on time, but only five days later I found it could not work properly.
On Saturday morning I tried to turn on the cell phone as usual but failed. I managed to turn it on after trying it for fifteen minutes. When it was turned on, all I could see on the screen were just some lines! Then I dialed your service number several times, but the line was always busy.
I have to use a cell phone in my job almost all the time. This problem has seriously affected my job and life. Can you get it repaired as soon as possible or have it replaced with a new one? I sincerely hope that you will look into this matter immediately and deal with it quickly and properly.
An early response would be appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua

试题分析：所选内容与我们的生活相关，又是考生比较熟悉的书信格式，考生只要把所给要点逐条陈述，适度发挥，不要逐句翻译，注意使用一些过渡句或过渡词来使句子读起来流畅。但是要注意使用正确的时态，因为这封信是给出对方投诉意见，还要注意写作时的语气要客气。
点评：考生在写作时，可以在作文中穿插使用一些过渡性词语。这样会使作文条理清楚，连贯自然，行文紧凑。应该注意适当增加细节以使行文连贯，比如适当选用表示因果、递进、转折关系的连接词，使文章流畅、通顺，并避免因反复使用句式相同的简单句而造成的单调感。