Question

你校响应号召创建节约型校园，可是浪费现象依然极其严重。请你在班会课上发表演讲，号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。内容包括：
浪费的东西有水、电、餐厅的食物等；
危害性：自身性格、父母经济负担、自然资源等；
提出措施。
注意：
词数120左右，演讲的开头和结尾已写好，不记入总词数；
不要逐次逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。
Dear friends,
May I have you attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.
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Answer 1

Dear friends,
May I have you attention, please? Now I’d like to make a speech here.
As we all know, there is a lot of waste on campus. For example, some students leave the lights on in the daytime, keep water running after washing and leave a lot of food uneaten on the table. Some students even throw away their exercise books with only a few pages written.
So it is high time that we had to deal with the problem. The reasons are as follows. In the first place, the bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad influence on our character. Secondly, it adds financial burden to our parents. Last but not least, it also exhausts the world’s very limited natural resources---water, electricity, and so on. Then how to reduce the waste?
In my opinion, it is everybody’s responsibility to fight against this phenomenon. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in saving energy and reducing waste.
That’s all. Thank!

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。