Question

现在正是穿暖花开的好时节。你校学生会以“高中学生要不要参加春游活动”为题，向学生做调查。根据下面所出示的调查结果，请你以“Whether Or Not Should Senior Students Go Spring Outing?”为题，写一篇短文，上交学生会。
65％的学生认为                          35％的学生认为
1.应该春游。                            1.不应该春游。
2.亲近自然呼吸新鲜空气,有利健康。，       2.期中考试结果未出，没心情玩。
3.活动使精神放松,大脑休息, 有利学习。    3.春游耽误时间，耽误学习。
注意：1. 词数：100左右。    2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

Answer 1

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Possible version:
In response to the 21st National Water Saving Propaganda Week from May 13th to May 19th, 2012, the Students' Union of our school organized a series of activities with the theme of advocating a low-carbon lifestyle and promoting water saving on campus. To make the movement better known, the Students' Union put up some posters in the students' dormitories and the classroom buildings to call on the whole school to save every drop of water through daily good habits. Some students also visited the waterworks, getting to know how polluted water was made clean. After that, we held class meetings to exchange experience about saving water. Through these activities, we not only have come to learn how to use water resources properly but have also raised our awareness of saving energy.

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，首先要认真阅读题目。现在正是穿暖花开的好时节。你校学生会以“高中学生要不要参加春游活动”为题，向学生做调查。根据下面所出示的调查结果，请你以“Whether Or Not Should Senior Students Go Spring Outing?”为题，写一篇短文，上交学生会，可知这是一篇客观的调查结果。需要些的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求100左右，写的字数不要太多，也不能太少。
点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。