Question

16．将下面5个句子按括号内要求翻译并连成一篇微作文．
1．Lin Qiaozhi是一名妇科专家，她把一生都奉献给了自己的病人．（devote）
2．她写了很多书和文章，有些是专门为针对农村妇女的．（非限制性定语从句；intend）
3．年轻时，正是她的苦干和决心使得她进入医学院．（强调句）
4．后来，使她成功的是她对病人献出的关爱和体贴．（主语从句）
5．Lin Qiaozhi向我们展示了一个人只有拥有坚定的决心才能实现梦想．（only的倒装句）
①Lin Qiaozhi，a specialist in women's disease，has devoted her whole life to the patients．②She has written many books and articles，some of which are intended for women in the countryside．③When she was young，it was hard work and determination that got her into medical school．④Later on，what made her succeed was the kindness and consideration she showed to all patients．⑤Lin Qiaozhi shows us that only with great determination can one achieve his/her dream．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
When she was young，it was hard work and determination that got her into medical school
她年轻的时候，它是很艰苦的工作和决心使她走进了医学院．
高分句型二：
Later on，what made her succeed was the kindness and consideration she showed to all patients．
之后，是她对待病人展现出的善良和体谅让她的成功．

解答 ①Lin Qiaozhi，a specialist in women's disease，has devoted her whole life to the patients．②She has written many books and articles，some of which are intended for women in the countryside．③When she was young，it was hard work and determination that got her into medical school（高分句型一）．④Later on，what made her succeed was the kindness and consideration she showed to all patients（高分句型二）．⑤Lin Qiaozhi shows us that only with great determination can one achieve his/her dream．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．