Question

7．假设你是高二学生李华，看到很多同学因为学习而忽略了体育锻炼，打算给学校英语报社投稿，鼓励同学们加强体育锻炼，注重身体健康．请按照以下要点，以"Health and Sports"为题写一篇英语短文．
写作要点：
1．身体健康的重要性；
2．运动对大家的好处：
3．你的建议．
注意：
1．词数100左右．
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Health and Sports
Good health is of vital importance to everyone．A healthy person can always be energetic and enjoy his life．A person who is in poor health cannot work well．（高分句型一）
When it comes to keeping healthy，playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people．（高分句型二） As high school students，we must study hard and take many important exams，which may make many students feel nervous．（高分句型三）So it's necessary to take exercise regularly to help release stress．Physical exercise can help make muscles strong．What's more，while playing，we get relaxed，which can help us study more efficiently．（高分句型四）
Since sports can make us physically and mentally healthy，we should do sports every day no matter how busy we are．Do remember that good health is the best wealth．．

Answer 1

分析 1．此书面表达可分为三部分来写．第一部分：根据自己的见解陈述身体健康的重要性，比如身体健康的人对生活充满激情，而不健康的人不能好好工作；第二部分介绍运动的重要性，比如运动可以减缓压力，强身健体，学习很有效率等；第三部分就加强锻炼给出自己的建议，比如每天坚持运动等．
2．文章时态主要为一般现在时，人称为第一人称．
3．可使用的句型有：限制性定语从句和非限制性定语从句；原因状语从句和强调句等．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：poor health：身体状态不好；keep healthy：保持健康；play sports：做运动；exercise regularly：规律地运动．
A person who is in poor health cannot work well．（高分句型一）
  When it comes to keeping healthy，playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people．（高分句型二）
As high school students，we must study hard and take many important exams，which may make many students feel nervous．（高分句型三）
What's more，while playing，we get relaxed，which can help us study more efficiently．（高分句型四）

解答 Health and Sports
       Good health is of vital importance to everyone．A healthy person can always be energetic and enjoy his life．A person who is in poor health cannot work well．（高分句型一）
       When it comes to keeping healthy，playing sports enjoys widespread popularity among people．（高分句型二） As high school students，we must study hard and take many important exams，which may make many students feel nervous．（高分句型三）So it's necessary to take exercise regularly to help release stress．Physical exercise can help make muscles strong．What's more，while playing，we get relaxed，which can help us study more efficiently．（高分句型四）
      Since sports can make us physically and mentally healthy，we should do sports every day no matter how busy we are．Do remember that good health is the best wealth．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．