Question

【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make
friends. Now, I'd like to offer you any advice.
Firstly, it's normal for you to feel lonely because you were living in a new environment.
Secondly, you should greet your classmates when met them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a
good idea if you take an actively part in class activities, what can help them learn more about
you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon unless you're friendly to the others.
I hope the suggestion above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you
for the future.
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel lonely in the new school, because you find hard to make friends. Now, I'd like to offer you advice.
Firstly, it's normal for you to feel lonely because you living in a new environment. Secondly, you should greet your classmates when them on campus. Thirdly, it will be a good idea if you take an part in class activities, can help them learn more about you. I believe you will be able to make new friends soon you're friendly to others.
I hope the above will be helpful to you and everything will be fine with you the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本文是一篇书信类应用文，文中列出了一些如何适应新环境的建议。
①在find后面加it 考查it用法。固定句型：find+it+形容词+to do sth, it是形式宾语，用来代替后面的不定式。
②any改为some 考查不定代词。在肯定句中用some表示“一些”。
③were改为are 考查动词时态。根据语境判断此处指现在的状况，用一般现在时。
④met改为meeting 考查非谓语动词。meet 和句子主语是主动关系，故用现在分词。
⑤actively 改为active 考查形容词。修饰名词应用形容词，故填 active。
⑥what 改为which 考查定语从句的关系词。非限制性定语从句中缺少主语，指代 activities，用关系代词 which。
⑦unless改为if 考查连词。根据句意可知，此处指＂如果＂。
⑧去掉 the 考查冠词。此处是泛指概念 ＂其他人、别人＂，用 others。the others 表示在一个范围内的其他全部。
⑨suggestion改为suggestions 考查名词单复数。根据上文可知，文中列出了多条建议，故用名词复数形式。
⑩for改为in 考查介词。固定短语：in the future＂在将来＂。