Question

你校某研究性学习小组正在开展有关“学生与家长、老师、同学之间的关系处理”的调查。请你就这一话题，写一篇英语短文。内容如下：
1.现状：关系处理的整体情况较好，但仍存在一些问题，如与同学吵架、不听家长和老师的建议等；
2.提出个人意见与建议（至少两条）。
注意：词数100左右，文章的开头已给出（不计入总词数）。
A survey about the relationship between students and teachers, family members or classmates is being made by a research group of our school.
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Answer 1

A survey about the relationship between students and teachers, family members or classmates is being made by a research group of our school. Generally speaking, we are getting on well with each other. However, there exist some problems. Some students are easy to their temperbecause of anxiety and study burden. What’s worse, they sometimes they quarrel with others, and even turn a deaf ear to their parents and teachers, which is very disappointing.
In my opinion, we middle school students should make our efforts to improve the situation. First, we should respect our parents and teachers as well as our classmates. Second, when we are not feeling good or happy, we can chat with our friends or teachers or even parents. It is likely that they can understand us better and give us some reasonable advice.

试题分析：提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。
点评：写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，写完后考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。