Question

【题目】请阅读下面图画及文字,并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

［写作内容］

1.用约30个词概括上面图文所反映的社会现象。

2.谈谈尊重他人的重要性。

3.举例说明在生活中你是如何尊重他人的。

（写作要求）

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3.不必写标题。

［评分标准］

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】People treat others differently. In Picture 1, a lady frowns at the cleaner, hurriedly off in disgust, while Picture 2 shows a man politely presents a flower to the cleaner and praises her sincerely. (34w)

Respecting others, undoubtedly, is what we should value when getting along with others. Quite a few things give rise to this. Firstly, it is imperative for us to cultivate and develop this traditional and treasurable quality, which can not only mirror our excellent character but also demonstrate our recognition of others. Secondly, only when we respect others can we earn respect from others, thus paving way for a harmonious social environment.

Personally, showing respect for others is always a principle I stick to. A warm smile or willingness to learn from others is what I always do to respect my parents, classmates and anyone regardless of their origins or status.

It blesses him who respect others, and him who is respected.

【解析】

这是一篇看图作文。

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.用约30个词概括上面图文所反映的社会现象。

2.谈谈尊重他人的重要性。

3.举例说明在生活中你是如何尊重他人的。

第二，人称为第三人称。第三，时态以一般现在时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为四段。第一段，用约30个词概括上面图文所反映的社会现象。第二段，谈谈尊重他人的重要性。第三段，举例说明在生活中你是如何尊重他人的。第四段，总结。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: treat，frown，praise，presents a flower，get along with, give rise to，mirror our excellent character，demonstrate our recognition of others, regardless of.

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:what引导的表语从句Respecting others, undoubtedly, is what we should value when getting along with others. which引导的非限制性定语从句 Firstly, it is imperative for us to cultivate and develop this traditional and treasurable quality, which can not only mirror our excellent character but also demonstrate our recognition of others.不完全倒装句Secondly, only when we respect others can we earn respect.

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:Firstly，Secondly，Personally.

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。