Question

10．假设你是红星中学的李津，你的美国朋友Mike遨请你今年暑假去他家度假，请你根据以下要点写一封回信．
1、接受邀请并表达感谢；
2、询问那边的情况（内容自拟至少两点＞：
3、约定接机时间：7月8日上午9点，航班号CA983
4、表达想见到他的强烈愿望．
（注意：短文不少于100词）
Dear Mike，
How is everything going？
（接受邀请并表达感谢） I am highly honored to accept your invitation for the summer vacation and thank you in advance．I will treasure this wonderful chance，（高分句型一）which will help me learn more about American culture and life．
Now I am making some necessary preparations for it．However，（询问情况） could you be so knid as to tell me something about the climate there and what clothes are needed？Besides my flight will arrive at 9 a．m．on July 8．（高分句型二）I would appreciate it if you can pick me up at the airport．I cannot wait to see you again．
I am looking forward to your early reply．（表达想见面的愿望）．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一） I will treasure this wonderful chance，which will help me learn more about American culture and life．
该句使用了which引导一个非限制性定语从句，which指代先行词chance．
（高分句型二）I  would appreciate it if you can pick me up at the airport．I cannot wait to see you again．
该句使用了一个固定句型，即  I would appreciate it if you…如果你能做…我太感激了．
高级词汇：be highly honored to do非常荣幸做；treasue珍惜；make preparations for 为…做准备；
Besides此外；

解答 Dear Mike，
      How is everything going？
    （接受邀请并表达感谢）  I am highly honored to accept your invitation for the summer vacation and thank you in advance．I will treasure this wonderful chance，（高分句型一）which will help me learn more about American culture and life．
     Now I  am making some necessary preparations for it．However，（询问情况） could you be so knid as to tell me something about the climate there and what clothes are needed？Besides my flight will arrive at 9 a．m．on July 8．（高分句型二）I would appreciate it if you can pick me up at the airport．I cannot wait to see you again．
     I am looking forward to your early reply．（表达想见面的愿望）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．