Question

5．请就"低碳生活"这一话题，用英语写一篇讲话稿，内容要点应包括：

部分同学的生活习惯	你的看法（不少于两点）
乘坐私家车上学	…
乱扔垃圾
不注意随手关灯，浪费电力资源；用水不节约，浪费水资源

注意：
1．发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2．发言稿开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3．词数：100左右．
4．参考词汇：
Dear friends，
As we all know，we are damaging the environment．Therefore，it's very important for us to form low-carbon living habits_________________________________________________
That's all．Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇发言稿，实际是一篇话题作文，要求根据所给题目写一篇表达自己观点的作文．要仔细读表格中所给的内容信息，要把表格中的要点信心扩展成一个个完整的句子，然后根据文章的中心话题和要求，把这些要点连句成文．运用多种句型适当运用高级词汇来增添文章的色彩．本文句式多样灵活，使用了一些连接词使文章更加通顺．
亮点句型一：As we all know，we are damaging the environment．众所周知，我们正在破坏着环境．这是一个由as引导的非限制性定语从句，关系代词as指代主句we are damaging the environment的内容．
亮点句型二：All these are bad habits which will surely do harm to our environment．所有这些都是坏习惯，肯定会损害我们的环境．这是一个限制性定语从句，先行词是habits，在从句which will surely do harm to our environment中做主语．

解答 As we all know，we are damaging the environment．（亮点句型一）Therefore，it's very important for us to form low-carbon living habits．However，bad living habits are still very common among us students．Some of us go to school by car，and some others are seen throwing waste casually everythere．Some even often leave lights on all night long or keep water running all the time when not necessary．All these are bad habits which will surely do harm to our environment（亮点句型二）．【如何做到地摊生活】
In my opinion，to form healthy low-carbon living habits，we should use as little energy as possible．It is important to turn off the lights and anything else electrical when not in use．Besides，planting trees can contribute to protecting the environment，which is cheap and easy．【表达观点】
That's all．Thank you!

点评 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．