Question

假设你是红星中学高三年级一班的学生李华，近日你班同学参加了世界自然基金会WWF组办的“我为哥本哈根减斤碳”活动，大家开始在日常生活中减少能源、纸张等的消耗。请根据以下四幅图提供的信息，给某英文杂志写一篇以“Low-carbon Living”为题的英文稿件，介绍你们参加此次活动第一天的具体做法并谈自己的看法。

字数100-120字

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

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One possible version:

Low-carbon Living

Recently, my classmates and I participated in the activity of Low–carbon Living organized by the WWF. On the first day, we chose to go to school by bike or on foot rather than by bus or car. Before we left the classroom, we made sure the lights and the computer were switched off. In order to make full use of paper, we began to write on both sides. Besides, while shopping, we no longer used plastic bags but carried environmentally friendly ones.

I think what we did on that day was meaningful, which can help us to form a good habit. We should also call on the people around us to do something for low–carbon living. Only in this way will the earth be a good place to live on.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇话题作文，这道题目有个特点就是要结合已给出的图片，所以首先必须看懂图，并且要用第一人称来写。写作时不能只是生硬的陈述图片内容，一定结合自己的做法谈谈自己的看法。需要注意不要偏离文章中心，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求字数。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如made sure, were switched off, make full use of, Only in this way，还运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：In order to；Besides, What’s more等等。

考点：话题作文。