Question

【题目】用英语写一篇介绍查尔斯·达尔文(Charles Darwin)的100词左右的短文。

人物：查尔斯·达尔文

生平：1809年2月( February)2日出生(be born)在离塞文河(the River Severn)不远的一个家庭里，十六岁时，达尔文进入爱丁堡大学(Edinburgh University)学医(study medicine)。后来，他又被送到剑桥大学(Cambridge University)学习，并于1831年毕业(graduated in 1831.)。达尔文持续不断地从事他的科学研究( continue his scientific studies) ，直到1882年去世。他被安葬 (be buried) 在伦敦威斯敏斯特教堂(Westminster Abbey)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Charles Darwin was born on February 2，1809，in a family，which lived not far from the River Severn.

Charles' father was a wellknown doctor and he hoped that his son would become a doctor.As a boy，Charles liked to go for walks in the fields and woods，comparing what he saw with everything he had read in the books.He was also fond of collecting many things，such as birds，eggs，stones，leaves and so on.At sixteen，Darwin was sent to Edinburgh University to study medicine.But he was interested in natural history.Then he was sent to study at Cambridge University，from which he graduated in 1831.

Darwin continued his scientific studies until he died in 1882.He was buried in Westminster Abbey.

【解析】试题分析：这是一篇人物传记，要求用100词左右的短文介绍查尔斯达尔文。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。切记不要逐句翻译。

【亮点说明】

这是一篇人物传记，内容符合要求，结构布局合理，文中使用高级句子。Charles Darwin was born on February 2，1809，in a family，which lived not far from the River Severn.非限制性定语从句用在句中；Charles' father was a wellknown doctor and he hoped that his son would become a doctor并列句中包含着宾语从句；Charles liked to go for walks in the fields and woods，comparing what he saw with everything he had read in the books现在分词做伴随状态；Darwin continued his scientific studies until he died in 1882.until引导时间状语从句。