Question

8．假定你是李华，就读于光明学校高一，请你用英文写一封信给你父母，介绍你在学校这半年来英语学习上的情况．要点如下：
从惊讶、担忧、进步及对未来的信心四个方面谈英语学习的情况．
注意：1．词数100左右；  2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语已为你写好；4．不可透露自己学校的班级、你的真实姓名及你的老师的姓名；
Dear parents，
I have been studying in Grade One of Guang Ming Middle School for nearly half a year．
                                                                                     
                                                                                     

Answer 1

分析 这是一个提纲类作文，根据题目要求人称用第一人称，时态用一般过去时态（过去英语学习上的问题），一般现在时态（现在英语学习上的进步）和一般将来时态（对未来的信心）．内容分成四部分：一引出主题；二 过去英语学习上的问题；三英语学习上的进步；四对未来的信心．
高分句型：
1．My English teacher's language ability （主语）also puts （谓语）what I have acquired in shade（宾语从句）．put…in shade表示"给…投入阴影，使怀疑"
我英文老师的语言能力也让我对于自己会的东西产生怀疑．
2．Anyway（无论如何），I am convinced（相信） that（引导宾语从句） I will improve my English proficiency（精通），though（一定让步状语从句） I still have a long way to go．
无论如何，我相信我将会是自己精通英语，尽管我仍旧有很长的路要走．

解答 One Possible Version
Dear parents，
I have been studying in Grade One of Guang Ming Middle School for nearly half a year．This half year has seen my surprises，worries，and progress in English learning．（引出主题）
First，I was shocked to find myself surrounded by much better English learners when I started my English course．My English teacher's language ability also puts what I have acquired in shade．【高分句型一】Sometimes I even can't follow my English teacher's lectures．Secondly，my spoken English always embarrasses myself．I regret for what I ignored before．Thirdly，my vocabulary is still my concern．A larger vocabulary is required to follow the teacher in class for the way of teaching and learning is quite different here．I was upset when I saw my poor score of the test for Unit Two．（过去英语学习上的问题）Faced with all the difficulties，I was determined to fight．With the help of my teacher and my classmates，I have made progress．Now I can roughly understand what the teacher teaches in class despite a fewer problems．（英语学习上的进步）
Anyway，I am convinced that I will improve my English proficiency，though I still have a long way to go．【高分句型二】There is always light at the end of the tunnel，I strongly believe．（对未来的信心） 
                                                                                                                 Yours
                                                                                                                    Lihua

点评 虽然这是一个提纲类作文，但是给的东西很少，所以很多东西需要自己发挥．这就需要学生自己有关于这一话题的语言．因此平时要多读多看各种文字，从而使自己不至于没话说．