Question

【题目】 短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student who is studied in Britain. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation to Mary, the nurse in your hospital. I had to stay in your hospital because of a traffic accident what happened last weekend. Without family or friends here, I was extreme sad and lonely. To my great joys, Mary took good care of me. She talked to me in every day and encouraged me to be strong and positive. There, I feel comfortable even if I had been at home. Thanks her professional help and care, I recovered quickly. I believe that I truly deserves praise for her kindness and professional care.

Answer 1

【答案】

I am Li Hua, a Chinese student who is in Britain. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation to Mary, nurse in your hospital. I had to stay in your hospital because of a traffic accident happened last weekend. Without family or friends here, I was sad and lonely. To my great ,Mary took good care of me. She talked to me every day and encouraged me to be strong and positive. There, I comfortable if I had been at home. Thanks her professional help and care, I recovered quickly. I believe that truly deserves praise for her kindness and professional care.

【解析】

【文章大意】本文为一封感谢信。讲述的是作者是一名在英国的中国学生，住院时护士Mary的精心照料他并鼓励他要坚强和积极。在她的专业护理和帮助下，作者很快康复。作者很感激Mary，给她所在的医院写了一封表扬信。

第一处：第一句话中的studied改为studying。考查时态和语态。句意：我是李华，一个正在英国学习的中国学生。study与主语之间为主动关系，且为现在进行时，故用studying与is构成现在进行时。

第二处：第二句话中的the改为a。考查冠词。句意：我写信表达我对你们医院的一名护士玛丽的真诚的感激。根据句意可知应用不定冠词a。

第三处：第三句话中的what改为which或that。考查定语从句。句中定语从句缺少主语，应用关系代词which或that修饰先行词a traffic accident。

第四处：第四句话中的extreme改为extremely。考查副词。句中应用副词修饰形容词sad and lonely，故用extremely。

第五处：第五句话中的joys改为joy。考查名词。to my great joy令我非常高兴的是。此处joy指的是抽象名词＂高兴，快乐＂，为不可数名词，故改为joy。

第六处：第六句话中的in去掉。考查短语。every day作时间状语时前面不用介词。

第七处：第七句话中的feel改为felt。考查时态。根据上下文可知此处应用一般过去时，故用felt。

第八处：第七句话中的even改为as。考查状语从句。句意：在那里，我感觉舒服就好像在家里一样。根据句意可知应用as if表示＂好像＂。

第九处：第八句话中的Thanks后加to。考查介词短语。thanks to幸亏，多亏了。

第十处：最后一句话中的truly前的I改为she。考查代词。句意：我相信她应该由于她的善意和专业护理而受到表扬。根据句意可知此处应该用she。