Question

20．假设你是某中学的学生李津．你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，你欲参选，必须写一篇演讲稿．
[写作内容]
请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿．

竞选职位：学校英语俱乐部副主席 个人优势：（1）性格外向、与人相处融洽 （2）善于组织各种活动 中选后决心：协助主席，服务同学 中选后设想：举办讲座、英语晚会、英语演讲比赛等活动来提高同学英语水平，激发学习兴趣 表达愿望：希望同学们投票选你，相信你能干好工作

参考词汇：副主席vice president　竞选run for
[写作要求]
1．只能使用5个句子表达全部内容．
2．短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总句数．
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯．
Good afternoon，my dear friends，
My name is Li Jin．
      ．
Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇演讲稿，参选校英语俱乐部新一届副主席的选举．
写作时人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
写作要点：1．竞选职位； 2．个人优势；3．中选后决心；4．中选后设想；5．表达愿望．
重要短语：have the chance to do sth （有机会做某事），run for （参加的…竞选），be qualified for（能胜任…），get on well with（与…相处愉快），be skilled at（擅长于），try one's best to（努力做某事），assist sb （帮助某人），serve sb （为某人服务），intend to do（打算做某事），in order to do（为了做某事），such as（例如）．
【高分句型一】
1．①Concerning this position，I feel qualified for the job②because I am outgoing，getting on well with others，and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities．
①此处是介词短语"concerning this position"作状语，主句为"I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing，getting on well with others，and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities"．
②此处是由连词"because"引导的原因状语从句．
【高分句型二】
2．If I am lucky enough to be the vice president，I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students．
此处是连词"if"引导的条件状语从句，主句为"I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students"．
【高分句型三】
3．In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English，I intend to organize some activities such as lectures，English parties，English speech contests and so on．
此处是由介词短语"in order to+动词词组"作目的状语，主句为"I intend to organize some activities such as lectures，English parties，English speech contests and so on"．

解答 My name is Li Jin．Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club．（竞选职位） Concerning this position，I feel qualified for the job because I am outgoing，getting on well with others，and skilled at organizing all kinds of activities．【高分句型一】（个人优势）If I am lucky enough to be the vice president，I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students．【高分句型二】（中选后决心）In order to improve our English and make more students interested in English，I intend to organize some activities such as lectures，English parties，English speech contests and so on．【高分句型三】（中选后设想）I sincerely hope you will vote for me and please believe that I will be a good vice president．（表达愿望）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．