Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是李华，你校的联谊学校——美国乔治中学要招聘一名学生外联部长，主要负责与其联系和接待等工作。条件是英语水平高，能熟练操作计算机，热心为两校服务。请你据此写一封自荐信。

参考词汇：外联部长director of foreign liaison department

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir or Madam,

I have learned that your school is in need of a director of foreign liaison department. I would like you to consider me for the position.

I have a great passion for English. In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper in my school. I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me work well. What's more, I am always ready to help others and offer good service. I think I am competent for the job. I would appreciate it if I could have the opportunity to get the job.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours ,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是应用文写作。要点已给出，写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】I have learned that your school is in need of a director of foreign liaison department.运用宾语从句； In the past two years, I have been an editor for the English Paper in my school. 运用现在完成时，增加文章的时态变化；I am familiar with computer operation and office softwares, which can help me work well. 运用定语从句；同时运用很多连接词如What's more等，I think I am competent for the job. I would appreciate it if I could have the opportunity to get the job.此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。