Question

假如你是新华中学学生李华，在最近举行的市高中生英语口语大赛中获得了一等奖。某英语报社邀请你写一篇稿件，介绍你练习英语口语的经验。稿件内容如下：
1．树立自信，克服羞怯心理；
2．多参加英语角活动；
3．多看英语新闻（如CCTV-9）
注意：1. 词数：120-150；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

I'm Li Hua from Xinghua Middle School. Now I'd like to share my experience in practicing oral Enghsh.
Firstly, I'm always confident and brave. I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me. I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends. By talking with them, my oral English has improved a lot. Finally, some English programs like CCTV-9 contribute to the prograss in my speaking ability. Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation.
Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes. Our hard work will finally be rewarded.

解析试题分析：这是一篇提纲式作文：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。因为只是提纲，没有具体的要点，要根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点说明】I'm always confident and brave. I seize every opportunity to speak, not afraid of making mistakes which may embarrass me. I also find it of great benefit to take part in English corners, where I make many friends. 这两句话都用了非限制性定语从句，By talking with them, my oral English has improved a lot. some English programs like CCTV-9 contribute to the prograss in my speaking ability. 这句话用的是动名词的用法，Through this channel, not only am I kept informed of the current events going on both at home and abroad, I also learn the standard pronunciation and intonation by repeated imitation.这句话用了倒装， Practice makes perfect, as the saying goes. 这里用了谚语。还有文章用了Firstly,Finally,这样的词，让文章更加连贯。
考点：考查提纲类短文