Question

书面表达（共1小题，满分15分）

假如你是高二学生黎明。最近，某英文报刊正在进行“怎样才算是一名好学生”的讨论。现在，请你用英语给该报编辑写封信，从以下方面谈谈你对此话题的看法。

1.校内表现（尊敬老师、遵守校规、学习刻苦）；

2.校外表现（爱父母、做家务、做好公民）；

3.身体心智（健康）；

4.生活态度（积极）

注意：1. 词数100字左右。

2. 信的开头和结尾已为你写好。

3. 书写清晰、工整

Dear editor,

I am Li Ming, a senior two student.____________________________________

                                                                       

                                                                       

                                                                       

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best Regards

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear editor,

I am Li Ming, a senior two student. ①I’m writing to tell you what a good student should be like.

②In my opinion, a good student should respect his teachers and get on well with others. He should be hard-working and obey the school rules. ③While at home, he loves his parents and help them with some housework whenever needed. Once in a public place, he must be a good citizen. He shouldn’t do anything that is against the law or any other regulations. ④But the most important thing is that he must be healthy physically and mentally. ⑤Finally, a good student should not only care about study, but also hold an active attitude towards life.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Best regards.                                    

Your sincerely,

Li Ming

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文，需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。

考点：提纲作文

点评：本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。