Question

5．现在我们国家越来越重视体育，尤其中小学学校，加强了对体育课要求．请就这一现象写一篇关于在中小学生中开展体育课的重要性．
内容要点：
1．说明健康的重要性．
2．用个人经历说明运动的好处．
3．号召中小学生积极加入到体育锻炼中来．
注意：1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
As the proverb goes，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"From this，we know that health is very important to everybody，especially to teenagers．But how to keep fit？As far as I'm concerned，I think doing physical exercises has lots of advantages．（高分句型一）
First of all，doing exercises in the morning will build up my body as well as gives me a good appetite to eat my breakfast．（高分句型二）What's more，the air in the morning is really fresh and clean，so I can keep my mind active in class．By doing physical exercises every day I can keep my mind clear that I can finish my homework in time．（高分句型三）If I do not do any physical exercise，I will feel tired．During the night，I may find it harder to fall asleep．Second，doing exercises every day will help me to develop a better personality．It takes time and patience to do exercises．Doing physical exercises makes me stronger and healthier．That's my personal experience．
As a student，sports are important．You can pick up your favorite sport and do it every day．Only in this way can you have both pleasure and a healthy body．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息现在我们国家越来越重视体育，尤其中小学学校，加强了对体育课要求．请就这一现象写一篇关于在中小学生中开展体育课的重要性，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：说明健康的重要性．用个人经历说明运动的好处．号召中小学生积极加入到体育锻炼中来．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：As the proverb goes正如谚语所说；As far as I'm concerned以我的观点来看； First of all首先；build up my body强身健体；What's more而且；Second其次；in this way以这种方式；do exercises做运动；
As far as I'm concerned，I think doing physical exercises has lots of advantages．（高分句型一）
First of all，doing exercises in the morning will build up my body as well as gives me a good appetite to eat my breakfast．（高分句型二）
By doing physical exercises every day I can keep my mind clear that I can finish my homework in time．（高分句型三）

解答 As the proverb goes，"All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．"From this，we know that health is very important to everybody，especially to teenagers．But how to keep fit？As far as I'm concerned，I think doing physical exercises has lots of advantages．（高分句型一）
        First of all，doing exercises in the morning will build up my body as well as gives me a good appetite to eat my breakfast．（高分句型二）What's more，the air in the morning is really fresh and clean，so I can keep my mind active in class．By doing physical exercises every day I can keep my mind clear that I can finish my homework in time．（高分句型三）If I do not do any physical exercise，I will feel tired．During the night，I may find it harder to fall asleep．Second，doing exercises every day will help me to develop a better personality．It takes time and patience to do exercises．Doing physical exercises makes me stronger and healthier．That's my personal experience．
       As a student，sports are important．You can pick up your favorite sport and do it every day．Only in this way can you have both pleasure and a healthy body．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．