Question

网购已成为很多人青睐的一种现代购物形式。请你以“Online Shopping”为题，根据以下三个要点，分三段写一篇100字左右的英语短文，谈谈网购现象及你的看法或建议
1.越来越多的人喜欢在网上购买商品
2.网上购物可能存在的问题(如：假货；货物损坏；不易退换)
3.你的看法或建议
注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇：网店店主Internet shopping provider  假货fake goods
Online Shopping
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Answer 1

Online Shopping
Nowadays, shopping through the Internet has become increasingly popular among us, and many young people prefer to buy almost everything they want online.
Online shopping, however, can sometimes bring headaches to people when they enjoy shopping online. Firstly, the quality of the goods may not be as good as they are described.Secondly, it is possible for the buyers to buy fake goods. In addition, some people find it very hard to make a change when they are not satisfied with the things bought online.
I strongly hold the view that regulations and rules should be worked out for the Internet shopping providers. If so, I believe a promising life of online shopping is just awaiting us.
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试题分析：考查半开放性作文。本文给出的文字提示不多，很多要点需要考生自己组织，网上购物的问题可以从服装不合身；假货成堆；难以退换等角度展开；个人观点可以从加强网上购物的法律规则，加强监管等方面仔细描述。。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象，进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法，增添了写作的灵活性，同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
点评：半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。