分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文,根据提示信息假如你是Andy,在高中英语的学习中遇到了一些困难和问题,你给在美国的笔友Susan写信,希望得到她的帮助,写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,要点包括:学习英语兴趣不大; 单词总是记不住; 对口语没有信心,害怕出错误,不敢张口说,也不愿意参与小组讨论; 阅读中遇到生词,不知如何处理; 2、提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象.要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写.本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写.3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态.4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点.
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种表达:
高分句型一:
I am not very interested in English and I have difficulties remembering new words.
句中使用短语有"be interested in sth 对…感兴趣"、"have difficulty doing sth 做某事有困难".这句话意为:我对英语不感兴趣,而且记新单词有困难.
高分句型二:
I spend a lot of time trying to learn the new words by heart,but I always forget a lot.
句中使用短语有:spend+时间+doing sth 做某事花费多长时间;try to do sth 尽力做某事.这句话意为:我很用心地花了大量时间在学习新单词上,但是我总是忘记.
解答 Dear Susan,
I'm very pleased to write to you.I am not getting along well with my English.(开篇点题)I am not very interested in English and I have difficulties remembering new words.【高分句型一】I am afraid of making mistakes and I am afraid to discuss in groups.Besides,I don't know how to deal with the new words in reading.I spend a lot of time trying to learn the new words by heart,but I always forget a lot.【高分句型二】And I find grammar is too difficult for me.I can't make complete sentences and I often make mistakes in grammar.(学习英语的困难)What should I do?Please give me some advice.(寻求帮助)
Yours sincerely,
Andy
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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