Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。端午节将至，上周末你和父母去看望爷爷奶奶，并学习了包粽子。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语角”投稿，记述整个过程。

注意：词数不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】With the Dragon Boat Festival right around the corner, last weekend, my parents and I went to see my grandparents. We enjoyed our family time together.

Before going to my grandparents’ home, we went shopping in the nearby supermarket for groceries. We bought some of my grandparents’ favorite food as well as sticky rice and bamboo leaves—ingredients to make the traditional food that we eat during Dragon Boat Festival, Zongzi.

Carrying all our purchases, we went to my grandparents’. Not having seen one another for some time, we were all very happy for the get-together. My grandparents had missed us very much.

After a pleasant chitchat, exchanging the latest news in our lives, I asked my grandma to teach me how to make Zongzi. Grandma then began showing me the “standard procedure” in Zongzi making—soaking the sticky rice and bamboo leaves and washing the red dates. Seeing the bowls and plates of different sizes, I was almost overwhelmed. I had never realized it would take so much delicate handwork to make a Zongzi. However, my grandma proved a great teacher, and I a quick learner.

After making the Zongzi, we sat down to a full table of family traditional dishes that my parents had cooked. Not only did we enjoy the delicious meal, but also the funny stories that were told around the dinner table. It’s true, laughter is the best medicine.

I was so happy that my whole family praised my Zongzi and to see their smiling faces after taking the first bite, it really made my day. I’ll always remember this day. For sure, nothing beats quality time together with family.

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于图画作文。

第一步：根据提示可知，假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。端午节将至，上周末你和父母去看望爷爷奶奶，并学习了包粽子。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语角”投稿，记述整个过程。

第二步：根据图片确定文章内容和关键词语，第一幅图要表达看望爷爷奶奶之前，去超市买礼物和包粽子的材料；第二幅图表达见到爷爷奶奶的高兴之情；第三幅图表达全家人一起包粽子，作者学包粽子；第四幅图表达全家一起进餐、吃粽子、谈笑。关键词语有：went shopping, sticky rice and bamboo leaves, get-together, Zongzi making, traditional dishes, laughter.

第三步：根据提示和关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。本文用一般过去时。

第四步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。