Question

【题目】假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Grace,

How is everything going with you?

I’ve been in Russia for two months. This is the first time that I’ve been away my family for such a long time. With the help of Katia, a roommate of me, I soon get used to live without my parents around. Katia, like many other Russian girls, are nice and lively. We became friend shortly after we met each other. Although her English is a little hardly to understand, we enjoy chatting and we usually talk a lot about our own family. We’re both surprising that Chinese culture and Russian culture were so different. Now, we are planning a small party for the next Sunday. There, Katia will introduce me to some of her friends, one of who has been to China several times. I just can’t wait.

Write back to me as soon as possible.

Yours,

Betty

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】在away后加from

【2】me→mine

【3】live→living

【4】are→is

【5】friend→friends

【6】hardly→hard

【7】surprising→surprised

【8】were→are

【9】去掉next前面的the

【10】who→whom

【解析】

试题分析：作者在信中讲述了在俄国学习生活和交友的情况。

【1】在away后加from.考查介词。表示“远离某地”后面有宾语要用away from，故在away后加from。

【2】me→mine.考查代词。表示“我的一个室友”是a roommate of mine，用名词性物主代词，故me改为mine。

【3】live→living.考查动词形式。used to do“过去常常做某事”；get used to doing“习惯于做某事”。此处表示我很快习惯了父母不在身边生活，故live改为living。

【4】are→is.考查主谓一致。句中主语是Katia是单数，like many other Russian girls是附加成分，不作主语，所以谓语动词与主语Katia一致，用单数，故are改为is。

【5】friend→friends.考查名词。此处指我和Katia成了朋友，用复数。故friend改为friends。

【6】hardly→hard.考查副词。hardly“几乎不”，hard“困难地”。此处指Katia的英语有点难理解，故hardly改为hard。

【7】surprising→surprised.考查形容词。surprising“令人吃惊的”，主语是物；surprised“感到惊讶的”，主语是人。此处主语是We，指我们感到吃惊，故surprising改为surprised。

【8】were→are.考查动词时态。中国文化和俄国文化有很大不同是客观事实，故用现在时。故were改为are。

【9】去掉next前面的the.考查冠词。表示时间状语的next、last等前面不加冠词，故去掉next前面的the。

【10】who→whom.考查定语从句关系词。who即可作主语也可作宾语，whom只能作宾语，但定语从句前面有介词，作宾语指人只能用whom，故who改为whom。