Question

14．根据下面的英语提示，结合生活中的事例，就以下某方面谈谈书籍对你的影响，用英语写一篇短文．
Books are our friends．They introduce us different kinds of knowledge．Books are our teachers．They teach science，literature，etc．and tell us what is good and what is evil．
注意：
1．无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；
2．除诗歌外，文体不限；
3．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；
4．词数为120左右．

Answer 1

分析 考查半开放性作文的写作．我们可以使用叙事类的故事来表示书籍的作用，可以用海伦凯勒的故事来说明书的重要性，在写作的时候使用合适的连接词来连接个要点，让它成为整体．写作之前，首先认真审题，并在脑海中回想自己积累的哪些句式、句型、单词能用进来，这些单词、句型都应是经典的，不会错的．写的过程中，多注意灵活使用定语从句，包括非限制性定语从句．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：
When my tenth birthday was coming up，I couldn't help imaging what kind of present my parents would give me．（高分句型一）couldn't help doing 禁不住做某事
To my surprise，they gave me a book，My Life Story，which was written by an American writer---Helen Keller．（高分句型二） to one's surprise 令人惊讶的是，
 Disabled as she was，with the help of Miss Sullivan，she learned how to write English words and published many famous works，and My Life Story is just one of them．（高分句型三）with the help of 在…的帮助下
It was Miss Sullivan's continuous encouragement and instruction that inspired her to live her life to the fullest．（高分句型四）It is/was…that…强调句型

解答 When my tenth birthday was coming up，I couldn't help imaging what kind of present my parents would give me．（高分句型一） To my surprise，they gave me a book，My Life Story，which was written by an American writer---Helen Keller．（高分句型二） In the book，she wrote that she had not been able to see，hear or speak．Disabled as she was，with the help of Miss Sullivan，she learned how to write English words and published many famous works，and My Life Story is just one of them．（高分句型三）It was Miss Sullivan's continuous encouragement and instruction that inspired her to live her life to the fullest．（高分句型四）
     I was impressed with the writer's determination and Miss Sullivan's kindness．Whenever I felt depressed because of learning difficulties，I would read the book once more．
     Although it was ten years ago that I read the book，it shows me a universal truth that books are our friends，which always push us to move on．（高分句型五）

点评 半开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示．给考生自由发挥的余地较大．对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力．在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭．同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides，further，last but not least等．在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．