Question

假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文

中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been

hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street,

he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But

hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on

his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to

escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the

nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was

out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to

normal as soon as possible.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 surprising改成surprised

 has改成had

 such改成so

 to去掉 

 while改成when

 them改成 him

 or改成 and

 operation 前面加an

 dangers改成danger

 sincere改成sincerely

【解析】

 修饰主语用过去分词转换的形容词

 他被车撞是之前已经发生的事情

 后面的形容词，用so修饰

 see sb do sth   

 固定句型hardly…when…一…就…

 him指代Allee

 上下文不是选择关系，而是并列关系

 operation是可数名词，用a修饰

 固定词组out of danger

 副词修饰动词