Question

【题目】假定你是李华。本周日下午在市工人体育馆有一场音乐会，你想邀请外教Jack一同前往。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：

1. 音乐会相关信息；

2. 发出邀请；

3. 集合时间、地点等。

注意：1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Jack,

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Please let me know your decision before this Saturday!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

I’m writing to tell you that a concert will be held in the Workers’ Stadium of our city this afternoon and that a large number of famous Chinese singers will show up and sing their masterpieces there. I know you are quite interested in Chinese music. Therefore, I’d like our school gate at 1:20pm. Then we’ll go to the Workers’ Stadium by bus.

Please let me know your decision before this Saturday!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题，假定你是李华。本周日下午在市工人体育馆有一场音乐会，你想邀请外教Jack一同前往。请用英语给他写一封电子邮件。内容包括：1. 音乐会相关信息；2. 发出邀请；3. 集合时间、地点等。其次要确定时态，表示发生在将来的事情，所以这篇文章要使用一般将来时。在写作过程中，上下文意思要连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合题目所给出的信息，不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。正确使用写信的格式，词数控制在一百一十左右。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。I’m writing to tell you that a concert will be held in the Workers’ Stadium of our city this afternoon and that a large number of famous Chinese singers will show up and sing their masterpieces there.这里含有一个宾语从句。