Question

1．注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
During the travel back to my hometown，in the plane，I sat next to an old lady who looked very scary．She closed her eyes tight and grasped her red bag on her lap．I thought I might be nervous，so I planned to chat with her to make her to feel relaxed．We talk a lot about our families and experiences．When the flight over，I also helped her carry her luggages．She was so grateful about my help that she gave me the big hug when we were going to leave．On our way out，we waved good-bye．She kept on turning back to see me unless we couldn't see each other any long．

Answer 1

分析 作者在本文中讲述了在飞机上遇到一位紧张的老太太并帮她放松心情，缓解紧张情绪的事情，飞行结束后帮老太太拿行李，老太太对作者非常感激．

解答 During the travel back to my hometown，in the plane，I sat next to an old lady who looked very scary．She closed her eyes tight and grasped her red bag on her lap．I thought I might be nervous，so I planned to chat with her to make her to feel relaxed．We talk a lot about our families and experiences．When the flight∧over，I also helped her carry her luggages．She was so grateful about my help that she gave me the big hug when we were going to leave．On our way out，we waved good-bye．She kept on turning back to see me unless we couldn't see each other any long．
详解：
1．scary改为scared；考查形容词，scary可怕的，sacred感到害怕的．根据下文的She closed her eyes tight and grasped her red bag on her lap应该是老太太感到害怕，故scary改为scared． 
2． I改为she；考查代词．我认为她（老太太）紧张，…"．文中的代词指代老太太，故将I改为she． 
3．去掉to；考查非谓语动词，make sb．do sth．让人做某事，不定式作make的宾语补足语，省去to． 
4．talk改为talked；考查动词的时态，根据语境应是动作发生在过去，故应将talk改为talked． 
5．over前加was；考查系动词．题干中when引导的时间状语从句中缺少系动词，be over意为"结束"应用过去时，． 
6．luggages改为luggage；考查名词，luggage行李，是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故将luggages改为luggage． 
7． about改为for；考查介词．be grateful for是固定短语，意为"因…而感激"．故将about改为for． 
8．the改为a；考查冠词，give sb a big hug给某人一个大大的拥抱． 
9．unless改为until；考查连词，unless除非，until直到．"她不停地回头看我直到我们再也看不到对方"，根据句意改为until． 
10．long改为longer；考查固定短语． not…any longer是固定搭配，意为"不再"．

点评 短文改错题首先要整体理解短文意思，抓住中心思想，结合语境和上下文关系，充分运用平时掌握的固定搭配，习惯用法，句型结构等等来发现文章的错误之处，加以修正．