Question

书面表达  (满分25分)
假如你是李华,最近，你班同学就中学生是否可以带手机上学进行了讨论。请你根据下列信息，给校长写一封信，客观地介绍你班讨论的情况

70%的学生认为	30%的学生认为
1. 没有必要带手机。 2．带手机会分散学习精力，上课开机影响极坏。 3. 学生用手机会增加家长经济负担。	1．学生可以带手机上学，但上课要关机。 2．学生带手机可以方便联系。 3．信息时代的交流工具，不应禁止

1.词数:100字左右 
2.经济负担economic burdens.
3.信的开头已经为你写好
Dear principle,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school.

Answer 1

One  possible version:
Dear principle,
I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether a mobile phone should be brought to school.
To tell you the truth, the students in our class have different opinions.About 70% of the students think that we shouldn’t bring  mobile phones to school. Because with them we may not fix our attention to the lessons. If the phone is not turned off by chance and the ringing will destroy the class. Furthermore, using mobile phones will add to our parents’ economic burdens. However,about 30% of the students think we can bring phones to school on condition that we turned off them in class. With a mobile phone it is convenient for us to keep in touch with our parents and friends.Besides,the mobile phone is a tool of information times. It may not be right to ban students from carrying  mobile phones.
Yours sincerely,  
Li Hua    

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