Question

4．一家英文网站开辟了一个青少年专栏，主题是"十年后的我"．请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文．
1．家庭2．工作3．业余生活
注意：
1．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
2．词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．i will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'will do a good job in whatever I do．In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是说说对十年后的自己的畅想．时态主要为一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．家庭
2．工作
3．业余生活
常用到的重点短语：
get along  with sb与某人相处
in one's free time在某人的空闲的时候
such as 例如
continue to do sth继续做某事
in a word 总之
【高分句型】
1．I'will ①do a good job in②whatever I do．
①do a good job in在某方面做的好．
②whatever I do．作为介词in的宾语从句．
2．①In a word，my life will be ②much richer and more colorful．
①in a word 总之．
②much修饰比较级，表程度．

解答 I often imagine what my life would be like in the future．I think my life will be very different in ten years．I will be twenty-eight years old by then．I will have my own family，probably with a lovely child．（家庭）I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer．I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues．I'will do a good job in whatever I do （工作）．【高分句型】In my free time，I will continue to take regular exercise，such as swimming，running and various ball games．On my holidays，I will travel around the world．（业余生活）In a word，my life will be much richer and more colorful．【高分句型】

点评 这是一篇提纲作文．考生在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容．尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容，避免使用无把握或偏、难句型．注意所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．