Question

请以“My favourite”为题写一篇短文，内容包括：

1．读书是我最喜欢做的事；

2．我喜欢读书是受妈妈的影响；

3．读书是我生命的一部分，我离不开书；

4．词数：100词左右．

Answer 1

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解析：

学生：习作： My Favourite 　　Do you like enjoying reading? It is my favourite. 　　When I was a four-years-old(X1) girl, My mother often told me stories before I went to bed. I enjoyed the storied and asked her where had she got(X2) so many stories, “From books” was my mother's answer. From then on, I became interested in books. 　　Books are my best friends. I have spent most of my free time, reading different kinds of books. 　　On Sunday night, I was sitting on my bed, reading an interesting book. The book was very(X3) good that I didn't put it away until I finished reading it. As soon as I lied(X4) down, I heard the clock striking three. Oh, it was three o'clock of the next day. 　　Reading is an important part of my Life. I can't leave books as fish can't leave water. 　　剖析：1．表示数量的复合形容词作前置定语时，其中名词常用单数，因此此句中的four-years-old应改为four-year-old． 　　2．宾语从句用陈述句语序，即“主语+谓语”，因此应改为Where she had got． 　　3．so…that“如此…以至于”，因此，应把very改为so． 　　4．lie作“说谎”解是规则动词，而作为“躺、放”解是不规则动词，所以此处lied要改为lay(lie“躺”的过去式为lay)． 　　总评：这篇习作层次分明，作文流畅，紧扣主题，充分体现了作者渴求知识的内心世界，不仅交代了喜爱读书的原因，而且还讲述了自己一个只顾读书以致废寝忘食的故事．把书比作“朋友”和“老师”，使文章显得十分生动形象，但语序、习惯搭配还必须引起注意．