Question

20．今年年初，你们学校组织同学们学习"八礼四仪"，并开展了一个"争做文明市民"的活动．同学们在人际交往、社会公德等方面都比以前有了很大的进步．请你根据下表所提示的要点，以"To be a civilized citizen"为题，写一篇英语短文，介绍同学们的表现，并谈你对这个活动的看法．

表现	人际交流	尊敬他人  诚信友善 乐于助人  礼貌待人
	社会公德	遵守交规  爱护环境 热心慈善  （自拟一点）
感受	你对这个活动的看法（自拟，至少一点）

要求：
1 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2 必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；
3 词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等．
To be a civilized citizen
Our school organized an educational activity called"To be a civilized citizen"at the beginning of the year．All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many ways．
                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
They know ①②it's important to respect the old and care for the young．他们知道尊老爱幼是重要的．
①know后是省略了that的宾语从句．
②it's+adj+to do sth 做某事是怎样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式是真正主语．
【高分句型二】
They are always patient enough to listen to others about the joy and worries．他们总是有足够的耐心去倾听他人的快乐和担忧．
adj+enough to do sth足够怎样去做某事．

解答 To be a civilized citizen
Our school organized an educational activity called"To be a civilized citizen"at the beginning of the year．All the students took part in this activity and they have improved a lot in many ways．
It's really nice to see the students being polite now．They know it's important to respect the old and care for the young．【高分句型一】They also realize they should have good manners and be honest．As a result，they are always friendly to others．Moreover，they are willing to help people any time．When they are on the bus，they always give their seats to people in need．They are always patient enough to listen to others about the joy and worries【高分句型二】．（尊敬他人  诚信友善，乐于助人  礼貌待人）
Now the students don't just care about themselves．They tell others it's very necessary to follow the traffic rules．They also protect the environment．They spend their spare time on the charity activities．They often raise money to help the poor students in our school．（遵守交规  爱护环境，热心慈善，帮助他人）
I'm glad to find the students have learnt a lot from this activity．I will learn from them and try to be a civilized citizen as well．（对这个活动的看法）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题．