Question

12．Write at least 60 words about the topic"I getfriendshipfrom my class life"（以我从班级生活中得到友谊"为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文．请在答题纸上吧作文标题补充完整，如：I get friendship/happiness/help…from my class life）
每个人的成长都离不开班级生活，你认为你的班级生活如何？从中你最大的收获是什么？你又为班集体做些什么？
The following points are only for reference
My class life is exciting/boring/interesting．（以下句型仅供参考）
I get …from…
I expect/hope （that/to）…
My class life is full of happiness．During the four years'school life，I've got so many things from my class life．Friendship is the most important and precious thing that I get． I never feel lonely because of my lovely friends．Once I failed，my friends supported me and gave me courage to move on．When I was ill，my friends helped me and looked after me well．When I succeeded，my friends congratulated me and shared my happiness．Friendship is one of the greatest things that I got from my class life．As the old saying goes，"A friend in need is a friend indeed．"I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life．In the last three months，I want to try my best to help my friends and make some wonderful memories．I expect to maintain the friendship between my classmates and me．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容以I get____from my class life．为题谈谈你的班级生活，时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1你认为你的班级生活如何？
2从中你最大的收获是什么？
3你又为班集体做些什么？
常用到的重点短语：
because of 由于
look after照顾
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
expect to do sth 期望做某事…
【高分句型】
1．Friendship is①the most important and precious thing ②that I get．
①最高级的使用．
②that I get为定语从句，that是关系词，先行词thing．
2．I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life．
so…that如此…以致于，引导结果状语从句．

解答 I get friendship from my class life
My class life is full of happiness．（班级生活如何）During the four years'school life，I've got so many things from my class life．Friendship is the most important and precious thing that I get．【高分句型】（点题--最大的收获） I never feel lonely because of my lovely friends．Once I failed，my friends supported me and gave me courage to move on．When I was ill，my friends helped me and looked after me well．When I succeeded，my friends congratulated me and shared my happiness．（经历）Friendship is one of the greatest things that I got from my class life．As the old saying goes，"A friend in need is a friend indeed．"I am so lucky that I get friendship from my class life．【高分句型】In the last three months，I want to try my best to help my friends and make some wonderful memories．（做些什么）I expect to maintain the friendship between my classmates and me．

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯