Question

17．著名作家Francis Bacon曾说过："Reading makes a full man．"可见，阅读对于每个人的成长都有着举足轻重的作用．请你根据以下信息提示，结合自己的观点，以"Reading Makes a Full Man"为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，表达你对阅读的看法和计划．
要求：句子结构准确，要点齐全，内容合理，篇章结构连贯．
★Why do we need to read？To get knowledge，open the mind，be more intelligent（聪明的），learn a foreign language…
★What can we read？Textbooks，newspapers，magazines …
★What are your reading plans？Reading at least…books in the coming holiday…★…

Reading Makes a Full Man
Reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．
Textbooks，newspapers，ma gazines and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person．
I'm planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday．And I'll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life．Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容以"Reading Makes a Full Man"为题表达你对阅读的看法和计划．时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1为什么我们需要阅读？
2我们能读什么？
3我的阅读计划
常用到的重点短语：
not only …but also…不仅…而且…
make sb+adj让某人怎样
help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
at least最少
spend+时间+doing sth花时间做某事

【高分句型】
1．It can ①not only open our minds but also ②make us more intelligent．
①not only …but also…不仅…而且…连接两个并列成分．
②make sb+adj让某人怎样
2．①Besides，②reading is also ③one of the most important ways ④to learn a foreign language ⑤like English．
①besides 另外，引出下一观点．
②动名词reading做主语，谓语动词用单数is．
③one of+the+最高级+名词复数，表示最怎么样的…之一．
④动词不定式做后置定语，修饰前面的ways．
⑤like表示例如，给出例子．

解答 Reading Makes a Full Man
       Reading is very important in our life．We can get knowledge from reading．It can not only open our minds but also make us more intelligent．【高分句型】Besides，reading is also one of the most important ways to learn a foreign language like English．【高分句型】（为什么我们需要阅读？）      
Textbooks，newspapers，magzines and other kinds of reading materials can help us know more about the outside world and help us grow into an excellent person．（读什么）
       I'm planning to read at least 5 books in the coming holiday．And I'll spend more time reading every day in my senior high school life．Reading makes a full man!Let's start reading now．（阅读计划）

点评 初中英语的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在对所出现的问题或是采取的措施描写中注意使用连词或是好的句式．对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文．