Question

9．假如你们学校正在开展自主性学习（提示：请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇短文，让更多的学生了解你校开   展研究性学习的一些情况．）
要求：1．短文应包括表格提示的所有内容，可适当发挥；
2．词数：70--100左右．开头已给出，但不计入总词数．

	过去	现在
课堂	老师讲解知识点，学生听讲，记笔记，没有足够的时间独立思考问题．	老师提出问题，学生相互讨论，并学会与他人合作，从而找出解决问题的方法．
课后	做大量的作业．	丰富多彩的课外活动，如：读自己喜欢的书，去图书馆或上网查资料等．
个人 感受	…

Great changes have taken place in our studiesIn the past，teachers kept on explaining the language points in class．We students just listened and took some notes．So we didn't have enough time to think about problems by ourselves/independently．We had to do much homework after class．But now teachers show the problems to us first，then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups．We try to find out the ways of solving problems，through which we've learnt how to work/study/cooperate with others．After class，we can have different activities．For example，we can read books we like，go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on．
In a word，now we are the owners of our study and we're happy．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：So we didn't have enough time to think about problems by ourselves independently所以我们没有足够的时间独立思考问题．adj．/adv．+enough  to+v．足够…而能做某事
句型二：We try to find out the ways of solving problems，through which we've learnt how to  study cooperate with others我们试图找出解决问题的方法，通过这些方法我们学会了如何与他人合作学习．which引导的非限制性定语从句．

解答 Great changes have taken place in our studies．In the past，teachers kept on explaining the language points in class．We students just listened and took some notes．So we didn't have enough time to think about problems by ourselves independently【高分句型一】．We had to do much homework after class．But now teachers show the problems to us first，then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups．We try to find out the ways of solving problems，through which we've learnt how to  study cooperate with others【高分句型二】．After class，we can have different activities．For example，we can read books we like，go to the library or surf the Internet for useful information and so on．
      In a word，now we are the owners of our study and we're happy．

点评 在写作时需要明确写作要点，注意写作中人称和时态的使用，做到思路清晰，句式灵活，表达流畅，所以平时应多注意常考的作文形式，积累相关的短语和词汇．