Question

7．生活中会有很多经历令我们感动，它们源于亲人、源于老师、源于同学、源于陌生人…，
它们冲刷着我们的心灵，激励我们向上．
现在，某英文报纸就"感动"话题征文，请你投稿．发表你的观点，叙述一次让你
感动的经历，并谈谈你的体会．
提示词语：moving experiences；in our daily life；help；remember；be deeply moved；
learn from                    

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．时态以一般过去时为主；人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．其次考生可从个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
重点短语：①让你感动的经历②自己的体会
1．walk along the right road沿着正确的路走
2．take the final exam 参加期末考试
3．cut his eraser in half 把他的橡皮切成两半
高分句型：
【高分句型】1．I was taking the final exam when I found I didn't have my eraser with me．我在参加期末考试时，发现没有带橡皮．（when引导的从句的动作发生在主句动作的进行过程中，主句用过去进行时，从句用一般过去时）
【高分句型】2．With tears in my eyes，I finished the exam．眼里含着泪，我解答完了试卷．（with短语在此处作伴随状语）

解答 We often have moving experiences in our daily life．They help us walk along the right road．
I still remember that day．I was taking the final exam when I found I didn't have my eraser with me【高分句型】．I was so worried that I almost cried．Just then，Mike，a boy next to me，understood what was happening．He quickly cut his eraser in half and handed me one part．With tears in my eyes，I finished the exam【高分句型】．（令自己感动的经历）
I'm deeply moved by what Mike did．He is a real friend．He cares others a lot．I want to learn from him to be the person in need．（体会）

点评 解答这种题目时，我们应该仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点． 要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写． 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯． 在平常的学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，让文章更出彩．