Question

8．假如你是阳光中学校报英语专栏的小记者，上周日参加了学校为迎接世界环境日组织的远足活动，请你给校报写一篇报道．

活动情况	活动地点	北海公园
	参与人员	七年级全体师生
	活动内容	上午：环保（environmental protection）演讲比赛 下午：自由活动（唱歌、游戏、放风筝…）
活动评价	…

要求：
1．所写内容必须包括提供的所有信息，并适当发挥；
2．文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3．语意通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范；
4．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息．
Last Sunday was a sunny day．Our school organized a hiking to greet World Environment Day．All the Grade 7 students and teachers took part in the activity in Beihai Park．
In the morning，we had a speech competition on environmental protection．The speakers talked a lot about protecting environment，like saving water，reducing air pollution．In the afternoon，we did what we like．We sang and played games together．Some of us enjoyed flying kites．Some volunteered to pick up rubbish in the park．
It's a meaningful and exciting day．We've realized it's our duty to help protect the environment．We had a lot of fun the whole day．I hope more activities like this will be organized in our school．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是报道上周日参加的学校为迎接世界环境日组织的远足活动，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时．人称主要为第一，三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．活动情况；①活动地点：北海公园 
 ②参与人员：七年级全体师生
③活动内容：上午：环保演讲比赛
下午：自由活动（唱歌、游戏、放风筝…）
2． 活动评价
 
常用到的重点短语：
take part in 参加
pick up 捡起
talk about 讨论

【高分句型】
1．In the afternoon，we did what we like．
did后接what引导的宾语从句．
2．We've realized①②it's our duty to help protect the environment．
①realize接省略了that的宾语从句．
②it's one's duty to do sth 做某事是某人的职责．it做形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
3．I hope ①more activities ②like this③will be organized in our school．
①hope后接省略了that的宾语从句．
②like this做后置定语，修饰前面的activities．
③一般将来时的被动语态will+be+过去分词，主语more activities是动词organize的承受者，构成被动关系，用被动语态．

解答 Last Sunday．was a sunny day．Our school organized a hiking to greet World Environment Day．All the Grade 7 students and teachers took part in the activity in Beihai Park．（活动地点：北海公园 ）（参与人员：七年级全体师生）
     In the morning，we had a speech competition on environmental protection．The speakers talked a lot about protecting environment，like saving water，reducing air pollution．（上午：环保演讲比赛）In the afternoon，we did what we like．【高分句型】We sang and played games together．Some of us enjoyed flying kites．Some volunteered to pick up rubbish in the park．（下午：自由活动）
    It's a meaningful and exciting day．We've realized it's our duty to help protect the environment．【高分句型】We had a lot of fun the whole day．I hope more activities like this will be organized in our school．【高分句型】（活动评价）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．要注意主谓一致等问题．写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．