Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是Dave， 昨天你收到了你的好朋友Jim的邮件, Jim 在邮件中向你倾诉了他的烦恼：

1.父母不了解自己，并且偷看自己的日记，于是他同父母吵架；

2.自己喜欢踢足球，但是花费时间太多，以至于成绩下降，感觉非常苦恼；

3.晚上熬夜写作业，第二天早上上课非常困。

请你根据Jim在邮件中提及的问题，回复一封邮件给他提一些建议。

注意;开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。词数：90词左右

Dear Jim,

I’m glad to hear from you and I’m sorry to hear that you’re in trouble with your parents and study.

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Good luck!

Yours

Dave

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jim,

I’m sorry to hear from you and I’m sorry to hear that you are in trouble with your parents and study. As your best friend, I’d like to give you some advice. First, I think you’d better talk more with your parents about your life and feelings. The reason why they read your diaries just may be that they want to know more about you. If you talk with them, they won’t worry about you. Then, make sure that you play football properly. Don't spend too much time on it, or you’ll have less energy to study. Last, why not do your homework as soon as you get home after school and go to bed before nine? I hope what I say can help you.

【解析】

这篇作文关于昨天你收到了你的好朋友Jim的邮件, Jim 在邮件中向你倾诉了他的烦恼我们，要求根据他的来信内容写一封回信，首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形，特别要注意如果主语是第三人称单数的时候，谓语动词形式要变化，这是一个写作的难点。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。