Question

本周是学校的“爱护野生动物周”。请你根据下面的材料，为班级板报写一个关于狮子的80词左右的简要介绍。
Appearance: big and strong; grey or yellow fur; sharp teeth
Ability: good at hunting
Lifestyle: live on grassland; don’t often move around; meat-eating animals
Danger: people hunt them for fun and change grassland into grazing land (牧场)

Answer 1

Lions are big and strong animals. They have grey or yellow fur. Their teeth are very sharp. Lions are good at running and hunting other animals. They mainly live on grassland. They are meat-eating animals. They usually look lazy because they don’t move around often.
Now there aren’t many lions in the wild. People sometimes hunt them for fun. And people keep changing grassland into grazing land. They are losing their living areas.

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。要求介绍爱护野生动物---狮子，从狮子的外貌特点到它的特征，以及狮子的生活习性，重点写到了狮子面临的状况，号召人们保护大自然爱护动物。本文所给材料比较详细，根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称复数，写作中适当使用固定词组，段落清晰，固定句式的使用会给文章增色不少。
【亮点说明】这篇短文内容详略得当，有很多精彩的短语 如be good at doing , They mainly live on grassland. And people keep changing grassland into grazing land. They are losing their living areas.点明了主题，号召人们要爱护野生动物，突出了文章的主题。