Question

【题目】为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及这样做的意义。

提示词语：behave well, in public places, obey the rules, keep clean, be polite,

提示问题：● What do you do in your daily life?

● Why do you do so?

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Answer 1

【答案】How to Behave Well

In order to build a civilized city,we students should try our best to behave well in the activities.It’s a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy.Our city should be kept clean every day.Don’t throw litter or spit everywhere.It’s good manners to say”Thank you” and “Please” and so on.We should never say dirty words.Be friendly to others and always ready to help people in need.For example,when we are on the bus,we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies.We should also obey traffic rules.When the traffic lights are red,we must stop.And we’d better not talk or laugh loudly in public.If everyone behaves well,our city will be more beautiful and more attractive.

【解析】

这篇作文要求为配合我市开展“创建文明城市(build a civilized city)”活动，学校举办以“How to Behave Well”为主题的英语征文比赛活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。谈谈生活中你是怎么做的，以及这样做的意义。首先应注意在短文中要包括题目中给出的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，并注意表达的层次和条理。其次要注意使用正确的时态和人称，通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，谓语动词用原形。最后要注意英语的表达习惯，英语句式与汉语在语序和词性上的使用是不同的，要注意不能逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子整体考虑，使用恰当的词汇和句型来表达，语法规范。还应使用一些较好的句型或者短语，增强文章的表现力。