Question

20．你一定有自己的未来计划．请你以未来计划为话题，根据以下提示写一篇100词左右的短文．
（1）你的梦想职业及居住地等；
（2）你做出这些选择的理由；
（3）你为实现未来计划应做的努力；
（4）…
注意：文中不得出现真实人名、校名等相关信息．
I want to be an English teacher，and I am going to work and live in the city of Beijing．
First，English is becoming more and more useful and important and being an English teacher is exciting，too．If I am an English teacher，I can help my students with their English study．Second．I like being with children because it makes me feel young．At last，Beijing is the capital of China．I can meet many English speakers and I can improve my English by communicating with them．
To make my dream come true，I will study English hard every day and speak English as often as possible．I will do more listening in the morning．I'm sure I'll love my job and my students and be a friend of them．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是说说未来的计划．时态主要为一般现在时辅以一般将来时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
（1）你的梦想职业及居住地等；
（2）你做出这些选择的理由；
（3）你为实现未来计划应做的努力；
（4）其他
常用到的重点短语：
want to be 想要成为…
比较级+and+比较级  越来越…
help sb with sth帮助某人做某事
make sb do sth让某人做某事
by doing sth通过做某事
come true实现
as…as possible尽可能怎么样
高分句型：
1．English is becoming①more and more useful and important and②being an English teacher is exciting，too．
①比较级+and+比较级  越来越…这里的两个形容词 useful and important 是多音节词，故more+and+more+adj．
②动名词短语being an English teacher做主语，谓语动词用单数．
2．①To make my dream come true，I will study English hard every day and speak English ②as often as possible
①动词不定式作为目的状语，也可以用in order to make my dream come true．
②as…as possible尽可能怎么样，中间加形容词/副词或名词．
加形容词/副词：as often as possible尽可能地多的
加名词：We need as many apples as possible．我们需要尽可能多的苹果；

解答 I want to be an English teacher，and I am going to work and live in the city of Beijing．（梦想职业及居住地）
First，English is becoming more and more useful and important and being an English teacher is exciting，too（高分句型）．If I am an English teacher，I can help my students with their English study．Second．I like being with children because it makes me feel young．At last，Beijing is the capital of China．I can meet many English speakers and I can improve my English by communicating with them．（理由）
To make my dream come true，I will study English hard every day and speak English as often as possible（高分句型）．I will do more listening in the morning．（你为实现未来计划应做的努力）I'm sure I'll love my job and my students and be a friend of them．（我的信心）

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．