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【题目】作文

根据下面提示，以“The art form I like best”为题写一篇关于你最喜欢的艺术形式的文章，字数不少于90词。

1.有多种艺术形式，我最喜欢音乐。

2.音乐能让伤心的人振作起来， 能给人力量。

3 我已经去过好几场音乐会，很多年轻人高度评价汪峰的歌。

4. 古典音乐有永恒的价值，是艺术宝藏，我认为很值得倾听。

5. 希望……。

The art form I like best

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Answer 1

【答案】

The art form I like best

Art is full of beauty, art is filled with sweat. Art has many kinds of forms. The art form I Iike best is the music. Music can make sad people cheer up, and it can also give a person power. I have been to several concerts, and a lot of young people spoke highly of Mr Wang's songs. I like Classical music. Classical music have eternal value, it is art treasure. I think it's worth listening to it. I hope Wang can bring more good works for us. We will always support you, Mr Wang.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于提纲类短文，话题是“The art form I like best”， 仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，本文很好地完成了试题规定的任务。覆盖所有内容要点；应用了我们熟悉的句型和短语Art is full of beauty, art is filled with sweat./ many kinds of/ make sad people cheer up等，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯。