Question

第三中学要举行一次毕业典礼，假设你是一名优秀的毕业生，学校安排你在会上做演讲，谈谈你的学习体会。
要求: 1. 词数在80个左右。
2. 用上所给词语，条理清晰，意思连贯，标点正确。
参考词汇：graduate, excellent, help, way, learn, award
                                                                                             
                                                                                 

Answer 1

Hello, everyone. I’m happy to give a speech about my studies. During the past three years, what I remember is to learn something from anyone around us, because everybody has his own good ways. We should learn and help each other. We must pay attention to the way we study, too. We will graduate, but I think we shouldn’t stop learning. We need to work hard to become excellent people, then our dreams can come true. Thank you for giving me the Excellent Student Award.

试题分析：这是一篇命题作文，谈谈自己的学习体会。题目只给出了主要写作内容，故动笔前先要认真阅读题目，确定写作要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是用一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:give a speech做演讲；eachother互相；pay attention to注意；come true成为现实；thank for doing谢谢做某事等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用, 让文章更出彩。