Question

【题目】俗话说“远亲不如近邻”。近日某英文报正在举行题为”My Neighbourhood”的征文活动。假如你是李雷，住在花园社区，根据以下流程图提示，完成一篇英文征文稿。

Conditions

Neighbourhood What is your neighbourhood like?

Neighbours What are your neighbours like?

How do they help others?(give two examples)

What did you do for your neighbours? (give one example)

Feelings How do you feel to live in your neighbourhood?

要求：

1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；

2）必须包括流程图中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；

3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；

4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。

My neighbourhood

My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. ________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】My neighbourhood

My name is Li Lei. I live in Garden Neighbourhood. It is very beautiful and clean. There is a big garden with all kinds of flowers in it. And big green trees are around it. You can see a lot of people talking and playing there. Near my neighbourhood, there is a supermarket, a bank a hospital and many shops. So it is convenient for our life. My neighbours are very friendly. When someone has problems, they must help him. Once Aunt Li’s daughter was ill, and her husband was not at home. So her neighbours helped her send her daughter to hospital. Grandma Liu is old and her children are not around. She lives alone. So our neighbours often helps her wash dishes and clean up her house. I think I should do something for my neighbourhood. So every week I help the kids in our neighbourhood learn English and play games with them.

This is my neibourhood. Though it is not big, I feel lucky and happy to live here.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们以My neighbourhood为题，写一篇文章，介绍自己居住的社区。题目中利用流程图的形式列出了文章中应包括的内容，学生们应以此为依据，组织语言，并用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文的主要内容应包括以下几个方面：首先介绍自己居住的社区环境；接下来介绍自己的邻居是什么样的，并举例说明邻居们之间是如何互相帮助的，以及你自己为社区所做的事情；最后表达自己对社区的感受。短文应以一般现在时或一般过去时为主，根据表达需要使用正确的时态，并注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意：首先应将题目中要求的所有内容都包括在内，不能遗漏要点。可以适当发挥，使文章内容更加充实，但注意要切合主题，不能写不沾边的话。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构考虑，选择恰当的句型、短语和词汇。句子结构可以简单句为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他高级句式，提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意衔接自然，表达流畅。