Question

假设你应邀参加学校组织的“英语学习师生座谈会”，请你根据下表所提示的信息，用英语写一篇发言稿，简单介绍自己英语学习的情况，并对学校今后的英语教学提出建议。

自己英语学习的情况	1.英语学习的目的
	2.英语学习的方法
	3.课外自学的途径
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对学校英语教学的建议	（请考生根据自己的经历与感想，提出两至三点建议）。

注意：
1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。
2.词数120左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计人总词数。
Dear teacher and schoolmates,1t’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my  experience of learning English with you.                         _________________ ____________________
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Thank you for listening.

Answer 1

Dear teacher and schoolmates ,It’s a great pleasure for me to be today and share my experience of learning English with you . I’m interested in English and hope to be an interpreter in the future .Naturally ,It is very important for me to learn English well .As everybody knows , vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks in a building . I usually memorize twenty new words a day and put them to use whenever possible .After class , I often listen to English programs on TV and on the radio .Besides , I’ve learned a lot from the Internet and other sources.
Now , I’d like to make some suggestions on English teaching and learning in our school .Firstly ,we should be given more opportunities to use what we’ve learned in order to have a better grasp of it .Secondly ,I hope our teachers can recommend more interesting books and magazines and give us more free time to read them .Finally , I suggest we have more English activities , such as English contests and festivals.
Thank you for listening .

解析试题分析：本篇书面表达要求根据图表提示信息写一篇发言稿，介绍自己的英语学习情况并且对学校今后的教学提出意见建议。首先我们要分析图表得出准确信息以合理安排篇章结构。就此篇文章而言，因为要求是两部分所以在段落安排上可以采用两段式分别介绍。而且图表提示信息较为简单，所以在内容上要适当加以发挥补充，以使文章内容丰满，上下文连贯。此外在写作时还要注意连接词的恰当使用以使文章条理清晰，结构紧凑。
【亮点说明】在本文中作者采用两段式，分别介绍自己的学习情况和提出意见建议，并且在文中使用了firstly、secondly、thirdly等副词来陈述自己的建议，这样使文章结构和条理都异常清晰。在语言运用上，长短句的结合、短语like bricks in a building 的形象比喻使得文章内容更加生动。此外besides，naturally等副词也使文章上下文衔接紧凑，语意连贯。
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